Marvin We Need A Makeover

THIS IS MARKED BY MY CLASS MATE ASHLEIGH.

Room 17’s courtyard badly needs a makeover!!!There are quite a few reasons for this.One because it is getting too crowded in the breeze and instead we could just play in our courtyard,but there is nothing to do.We are trying to get our courtyard more enticing so that there are less kids in the playground’s and the breeze.

We badly need to put cement in the muddy ditch, because it is very distracting when kids are playing.It is also a hazard because kids could be running and suddenly trip over.Room 17 asked Mr Jacobsen if it was possible to get our parents to help out with the cement or if we had to get a pro.

Secondly some of the kids wanted the trees to be removed so that we will have a bit more space to play.If we could get them removed then we could just plant the flower or tree seeds.And some kids chose to take away all the garden and put just concrete,which I think is a very good idea because more space means more kids

We also wanted to remove the rails because it is slower for us to get up and down.If we could remove them then more people could run around and play tiggy instead of walking up the stairs or ramp.Instead of kids playing tiggy on the playground they can have more space in our courtyard

We would be very happy if you could please help out.