Yesterday on the 29th of november all the year 7’s had an awesome challenge that required us to use our imaginations. We had to make a christmas tree for task one. Sing a christmas carol for task two. And a slingshot challenge followed by the secret circle for task three.
After we thought about it for 10 or so minutes we then started to get along with our tree. Our group struggled because Ahsin was putting everyone off but in the end we finished. The tree looked awesome because of the decorations but we didn’t place anything.
Two more minutes and it would be time to sing a carol. We thought we were going to ace it but instead we failed. My group and I laughed way too much because of Ahsin and his paper sword. Our carol sucked!
After morning tea for task three was a slingshot challenge and secret circle. We had to pick someone who was good on the shooting and one on the catching. Our whole team had to make a circle by sitting on each other’s knees. We didn’t communicate or work as a team which caused us to fail and not place anything.
Overall I think the day was awesome because it made us use our imagination and it was different. From doing the challenge it showed me how to construct a steady circle from sitting on each other's knees.
Hi Marvin,
ReplyDeleteGood clear structure and I like the variety of compound and simple sentences.
Then next step for you would be to write more elaborate on your ideas.
Great work.
Mr. O'Connor